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Post by Dreadlocksmile on Aug 11, 2009 8:36:56 GMT
Congrats dude. I know it's been a tough journey for you...
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Post by tasmaniac on Aug 30, 2009 23:05:43 GMT
ooh Byatis - I like it!
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Post by Dreadlocksmile on Sept 3, 2009 9:45:57 GMT
I'm bored of my not so amusing side-text now.
Can I have 'Eater of WakinDudes' instead please Mr Ian?
Ta pal.
P.S. You haven't asked how ThirdSight's coming on for a few days now...
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Post by ian on Sept 4, 2009 5:38:21 GMT
No I haven't have I.
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Post by Dreadlocksmile on Sept 4, 2009 8:29:54 GMT
Wow...that reply was as cold as a witch's tit. P.S. Will probably finish it this weekend. Want me to email you some feedback?
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Post by ian on Sept 4, 2009 16:28:11 GMT
Yes please sweetheart.
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Post by Dreadlocksmile on Jun 7, 2010 16:07:51 GMT
Ian - I'm quite bored of my 'My Throbbing Member Is Online' gag.
Be a love and change it for me? Pretty please with sugar and all things nice on top!
How about having "I'm a nice guy really" instead. Might stop the newbies running away when I open my big trap.
What do you think?
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Post by ian on Jun 7, 2010 16:20:25 GMT
I'm bored of my not so amusing side-text now. P.S. You haven't asked how ThirdSight's coming on for a few days now... How's Third Sight coming along? If it hasn't come along for a few months, would you prefer to come along with the snappier re-written next draft version?
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Post by Dreadlocksmile on Jun 7, 2010 16:33:12 GMT
How's Third Sight coming along? If it hasn't come along for a few months, would you prefer to come along with the snappier re-written next draft version? Thirdsight!!!! Funny you mention it. I posted an 'Author Quote' from Thirdsight only today! Well...I read your draft version ages ago. I enjoyed it. Although the storyline needs tightening to maintain a constant good pace. There were a number of points I scribbled down when I read it, which I'll have to see if I can dig out for you. I'll PM them to you if I can find 'em. But as I said....I enjoyed it. And you can obviously write well - which is a gift. Something I wish I could do a lot better. Have you re-worked any of it since?
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Post by ian on Jun 7, 2010 16:41:01 GMT
I'm bored of my not so amusing side-text now. P.S. You haven't asked how ThirdSight's coming on for a few days now... How's Third Sight coming along? If it hasn't come along for a few months, would you prefer to come along with the snappier re-written next draft version? Yes I have sir. I scrapped the first few thousand words as they were pants, added a new beginning, expanded the restaurant scene and deleted a few more thousand excess words throughout the rest of the story. I hope that the prose is a little tighter now. Oh, and I altered the ending a little. I would love to hear if you think it has improved Chris.
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Post by darrelljoyce on Jun 8, 2010 22:27:58 GMT
I've had trouble logging on here recently, but being able to log in tonight (for the first time in ages) was well worth it, just to read this thread. I know what I'd like under my name, but suspect that I may have many more posts to go before I get there (for some reason, I can't see how many posts I've got so far - d*mn my ancient PC).
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Post by darrelljoyce on Jun 8, 2010 22:35:55 GMT
Ah, I can see the post count now. PC seems to have been a little slow in updating.
If admin can do it, I'd like 'Dia Liteartha' under my name, please (yes, it's egotistical, but we can all dream, can't we)?
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Post by ian on Jun 9, 2010 6:03:46 GMT
There you go sir. Now are you going to tell me what it means? I'm guessing (with the egotistical bit) and the 'lit' that it means God of writing or something.
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Post by Dreadlocksmile on Jun 9, 2010 12:29:17 GMT
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